otherwise -- chapter 3 is pretty darned good... or, it's craptastic and I can't see how craptastic it is.
but -- it looks like Chapter 3 will be done today. I'll also take a look at chapter 4.
I expect that Chapter 4 will need the most work, but Chapter 5 is pretty good.
I've been working on this for so long -- sending it off for comments from Dr. Advisor will be pretty hard... but also a day of much celebration.
For now, the plan is to firm up chapter 4 by the middle of next week, then give each chapter one more day of purely proofreading.
I can do this.